You enjoy the bad girls, don't you?
Alex - I sure had fun writing her ;)
Ooooh, lots of sizzle in this. Nice work!
Sounds like you're going to be revisiting this one ;)She's a lot of fun...why end the scene so soon? ;) ;)Nice scene!
Ooh, this is hot! Nicely written!
I need a boyfriend. This bad girl fest was full of sexuality and brutality. Mmm.I liked this scene very much.........dhole
Thanks, Mary.Andrew - I only ended the scene in here so soon. The rest was quite innapropraite for public blogging ;)Thank you, Shelley.Donna - LOL. Thanks.
Haha! You made me giggle. Ends with a bang, indeed.
Cute, I love that last line.
Very nicely done - I always love to read your stuff!
Talli - I don't know what's wrong with me; I can't resist a bad pun ;)Thanks, Anne.Susan - I'm going to hire you as my own personal cheerleader soon :D
You have created some nice chemistry between these characters! I am intrigued by "leery of his calm" and "never ceased to amaze." It makes me think he has a surprise in store for her.
Thanks for the tittilation!Jai
Wow I was elated to see you had a part 2 up for us!!! I feel super special today! This was very bad... I love that you love the bad girls!!!
Genie - Thank you. And, nah, no surprises after this. That was her thinking of his personality and his_cough_ability to, er, stay warm even after the cold dip...Jai - You're welcome :)Jen - Aww, yo are special ;)
OMG... haha. That last line is greatness!!!
Ah, the voice of experience writes here, I see ;).
Just found your blog - and your writing. Holy cow, that atmosphere! Great job :D
Love this!! As that quote says, well-behaved women never make history so good for you for writing some "bad" girls!
She's not bad, she's goooood! ;)My kinda girl.Love,Lola
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