Saturday

Payback Starts out as a B...

This is the follow-up scene to yesterdays bad girl blogfest post. Thanks to Andrew for hosting it. I love my bad girl, Chloe, and her badder boyfriend, Jess.

*snip removed by blog owner*

20 comments:

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

You enjoy the bad girls, don't you?

Tara said...

Alex - I sure had fun writing her ;)

Mary McDonald said...

Ooooh, lots of sizzle in this. Nice work!

Iapetus999 said...

Sounds like you're going to be revisiting this one ;)
She's a lot of fun...why end the scene so soon? ;) ;)
Nice scene!

Shelley Sly said...

Ooh, this is hot! Nicely written!

Donna Hole said...

I need a boyfriend. This bad girl fest was full of sexuality and brutality. Mmm.

I liked this scene very much.

........dhole

Tara said...

Thanks, Mary.

Andrew - I only ended the scene in here so soon. The rest was quite innapropraite for public blogging ;)

Thank you, Shelley.

Donna - LOL. Thanks.

Talli Roland said...

Haha! You made me giggle. Ends with a bang, indeed.

Piedmont Writer said...

Cute, I love that last line.

Susan Fields said...

Very nicely done - I always love to read your stuff!

Tara said...

Talli - I don't know what's wrong with me; I can't resist a bad pun ;)

Thanks, Anne.

Susan - I'm going to hire you as my own personal cheerleader soon :D

Genie of the Shell said...

You have created some nice chemistry between these characters! I am intrigued by "leery of his calm" and "never ceased to amaze." It makes me think he has a surprise in store for her.

Jai Joshi said...

Thanks for the tittilation!

Jai

Jen said...

Wow I was elated to see you had a part 2 up for us!!! I feel super special today! This was very bad... I love that you love the bad girls!!!

Tara said...

Genie - Thank you. And, nah, no surprises after this. That was her thinking of his personality and his_cough_ability to, er, stay warm even after the cold dip...

Jai - You're welcome :)

Jen - Aww, yo are special ;)

Kimberly Franklin said...

OMG... haha. That last line is greatness!!!

She Writes said...

Ah, the voice of experience writes here, I see ;).

Zoe C. Courtman said...

Just found your blog - and your writing. Holy cow, that atmosphere! Great job :D

Julie Dao said...

Love this!! As that quote says, well-behaved women never make history so good for you for writing some "bad" girls!

Lola Sharp said...

She's not bad, she's goooood! ;)
My kinda girl.

Love,
Lola